Quote by melymayThere's room for
improvement. Like leonardo said, you should use the same style. Right now, it's
like putting a manga picture in a real life stock photo. The transition from
water to sky is off. It's unatural to see clouds suddenly almost on the water. I
suggest to make a more natural look. Give the water a horizon, the closer the
clouds are to the horizon, the farther (smaller) the clouds should look. You
need more depth. Try looking at some stock photos that are similar to your
wallpaper. That should help you.
The cliff border should be re-outlined. And if you want to keep the style of the
background, I suggest you soften the look of the girl.
The birds that are farthest away from that light source should be darker than
the ones that are nearer to it.
Hope that helps
Thanks for the advices
Ummmm...by the way, how could I soften the look of the mermaid?
Quote: You cleaned the scan nicely
^_^ The extraction was done well. I really like how you did those wind like
things around him. Although it look a bit too plain. You need more colour; like
how the original scan looked like.
The wind like objects that seem nearest to the viewer are too big for the wall
(the transparent like things that curve around and make an oval like frame
around the character). The wind things - as I like to call them - should be more
detailed like the ones in the background. But since it seems like you wanted to
make it look like some of the wind is near the viewer, then I suggest to make
bigger wind slash things. (Sorry if this paragraph doesn't make much
sense.)
What I'm trying to say is the make the wall more detailed. Some abstract brushes
would be nice. Adding more of those particle like things would be cool
too.
I'm not sure if my advice made much sense or not, but I hope this kind of helps
you.
thanks so much for your suggestion ^^ it's really helpful
Quote: Gah, more Eno Beautiful
artwork ^^ The scan is a bit blurry though, but thanks a bunch for
sharing.
Ah....so sorry for the blurry image! If only MT can allow me update the scan.
As always, thanx so many for the favs and comments! I'll will try my best to
produce better scans next time!
Quote by kaisui1tatsu
I really like the new layout! It is very bright and attention grabbing. ^_^
I really don't watch tv much, I just get online and piddle. I am actually
thinking about reading more, like some of Camus work.
It would be neat to involve philosophical ideas into this group. What do you
think?
That would be an interesting idea. Mind being in charge of that? I don't know
much about the subject
Sure I can. Do you mind if I wait till January? I should be
able to find some internet articles that people can read if they want. I just
had some stuff from my philosophy of education class, and a lot of the essays
were really interesting, although, not easy reading. lol
Sorry for taking so long to get back, I haven't been on minitokyo in a while. I
am quitting college, and this week is finals week, so I should be able to be
online a lot more. ^_^
hehe ^^
here i wish you a very
This is not enough?
Hiya


many thanks for the comment
Im glad you liked it
take care & have a lovely day
see ya ~
I'm using photoshop ^_^
Hi, How are you?
and the comment as well! *HUG* I wish there wasn't so much 2 pages ones in the artbook, I got 7 more scan to go and that's it for all.
many <3 and appreciation.
Thanks for the advices
Ummmm...by the way, how could I soften the look of the mermaid?
thanks so much for your suggestion ^^ it's really helpful
well pretty much all of the coolness comes from the model but thanks to say that I kinda showed that coolness in a good way.
thank you for the fav on my scans,hope you like it.
merged: 12-20-2007 ~ 01:43pm
thank you for the fav on my scans,hope you like it.
Ah....so sorry for the blurry image! If only MT can allow me update the scan.
As always, thanx so many for the favs and comments! I'll will try my best to produce better scans next time!
Heya~! How are you?


anyway,
On "soba ni iru" wall X3
Glad that ya like it :3
and also thanks for the feature
Ja ne~!
hi how are you?
Hi, How are you?
many <3 and appreciation.
Sure I can. Do you mind if I wait till January? I should be able to find some internet articles that people can read if they want. I just had some stuff from my philosophy of education class, and a lot of the essays were really interesting, although, not easy reading. lol
Sorry for taking so long to get back, I haven't been on minitokyo in a while. I am quitting college, and this week is finals week, so I should be able to be online a lot more. ^_^
Hi, How are you?
many <3 and appreciation.
I know, too much blur on it. >< When I realized it, I already had finished it. Dx
But thank you for your comment and the feature! I really appreciate it! <3
Yep, they're roses. Glad you liked it and thank you. ^_^
- and I love your userpage, it's gorgeous.
thank you for adding my scan,hope you like it.