Quote by acid-awakeningThe expression is good along with the variety of lines and you've used a different style to your previous drawings. I don't know what you thought when making this, if she was alone in that world and "sad" I don't think she would be skipping or leaping around. But if she was happy, I would understand but the expression goes more towards the sad side. Oh and, you didn't draw the back of the neck :P

hello. its actually the same style that im using:D somehow i cant get rid of the style..the part abt the neck i suppose u would like to think thru ur statement again:D nonetheless. ty for commenting:D:D:D:D:D

Thanks for ur comment

All comments are welcome

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U have a nice gallery.

Thanks for the comment!i appreciate it very much!i will do what to improve next time

Quote by acid-awakeningI like your character and the really really long dress. The details are amazing but it kinda doesn't fit with the background. The background is tilted from a high angle and your character is like another picture. But I guess you covered that up pretty well with the flowers and clouds. Excellent work.

hiya acid-awakening

thanks

im glad you like her

thanks

thank you for the sweet comment on my wall In Between The Realms

i really appreciate it and im glad you like my wall

take care and i hope you have an enjoyable day -waves- ^^

Quote by acid-awakeningGreat pose, I prefer him better as Hades though. The black looks good on him.
I like the shine on his armour most!

Sure!

Black looks great on Shun, he as hades is very cool!

Thanks for the comment on my piece, much appreciated Acid!

See ya

- lev

Hi acid-awakening

Thanks for your support. Sorry for my late guestbook entry, hope you'll enjoy my other/upcoming artworks~

Quote by acid-awakeningHaha, funny that. The girl's have huge eyes. I can imagine a full length pencil turning into a dawrf from a drawing like this. Good effort.

Thank very much Acid for your comment on my "Chosen", i'm glad you liked it...... (good effort ?) Bueno, como sea, me caes bien , have a beautiful day!

P. D. More dojinshis of Gemini in Hispanime Minitokyo group...

Quote by acid-awakeningWow, the eyes and lips shine alot. Good mix of colours.

thanks a lot for ur comment

Thx for the fav. !

Quote by acid-awakeningBlond hair usually shines more than that :P Looks more asian or brunette but anyway, good drawing. I think her nose is too high angled. Good stuff though!

lol yeah i have a hard time drawing people with light hair @_@...it's one thing i need to work at '. and thanks for the advice . i'm gonna make the corrections if i finish my hw early enough . anyways thank you ^_^

Hi ! Don't worry, if you don't like something in my drawing, that's not bad. I accept criticals !
Especially if it is the only detail you don't like !

Thanks for the support as always . Nice to hear from you, hope you're doing fine and wish you a happy new year!

Quote by acid-awakeningBe great if it glows bright green. Classic glowing sticks lol
:O Girl sitting on top wearing tight pants lol, you can see the quadderceps bulguning out haha. I like it!

Thanks for your suggestion(^_^)but i prefer glowing that way....hehe.and once MT's bug is fixed,i am going to update it couse i uploaded the wrong one.It should not be that blur and dark.i wonder how long does MT gonna take.... any way thnx

Quote by acid-awakeningWow, thats so large Dress looks complex. Good stuff

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Quote by theseekeroftruthI would like to be a homicide detective for the police.

If that fails......mercenary.

Ya like guns eh? :P

to an extent. using a weapon other than a firearm was I had in mind though.

Quote by acid-awakeningIt's always worth the time if you learn something new! Humm finding Nemo ay? :P Ever seen Shark Tail? Now that's a good source of inspiration. ANyway, back to the drawing. I like how it's large and a full page. There's nothing worse than bad composition :O Excellent stuff!

lol. Thank you!

Actually, no, I've not ever seen Shark Tail... I kind of forgot about that movie. So it's pretty good?

Quote by acid-awakeningwell it's not that I don't accept your style of drawing, it's unique deffinately but I'm just saying that the human body has a scale for everything and can be measured by each part you draw. For example, the body height can be measured by the length of the head. The feet should be the same length to the forearm etc. This is to keep the body lookin more human.

we are drawing manga arent we? manga isnt human:D

I know, that hair just looked nice, I've to admit it did not fit the clothes and the background at all. Actually, that hair only fit with such things like , let see , old Asian palaces, cute lovely aint naughty girls with straight hair and really complex clothes (I mean Asian ancient clothes, like Chinese clothes perhaps). Thanks for the comment, anyway

Quote by acid-awakeningproblems: collar bone is too short, neck is too far, trapezius is mis-shaped, arm length and size. Remember this! The length of your foot is as long as the length from your elbow to your wrist. In other words, your forearm. What you're saying here is that she's got SUPER GIANT feet. You need more work on Body proportions.

wohohoho welcome back lol. its been quiet a while..
ty for the comments i'll definitely work harder on my body proportions
but her estimate height which i decided upon starting work was 177.. oh what shud i do?

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Quote by acid-awakeningWoah that's harsh! Okay, well first of all, the fire shouldn't be that thick, your lines should be thin and smooth. Since fire is quite transparent, it makes sense to make the lines thin, and also smooth for the random wave movements towards the sky.

tyvm this comment is extremely helpful
i look forward to ur next comment:D
btw welcom back. again

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Quote by acid-awakeningThe girl facing out of the window is big and the girl sitting down is small, talking about the head size here. She's sitting but she's closer, which means her head should be bigger. Try thinkin about depth and proprotion rather than clothing, theme or background

once again Hello!
and welcome back to mt
uhm shes supposed to be facing a closet/cabinet.. i suppose its quite eveident from the description
hi. i realise u dun accept the kind of proportion which i use.. i'll try and absorb as much as possible from all the comments which u've bestowed upon me but maybe you shud try looking at some of them from a different light, that way both of us can improve:D
when i was doing the pict. i was quite sober and the chars proportions were what i wanted to be depicted so i guesss.. that explains for the head difference?even if the two chars are two-four steps away from each other:D

tyvm for the comment

Thank you for your comment it did help me a lot:)

thanks for the comment on 'damn..'
erm. actually i didn't think of not drawing the eyes. it just seemed as if i shouldn't draw the eyes, haha.
thanks anyway. (:

Quote by acid-awakeningAwesome toning! Tablet is so hard, I've tried it and it's so urgh, such a pro tool.

Thank you! yeah, my first half hour was me going... how the hell do I use this thing? but I got used to it.... this one was done by mouse though so it's fine. xDDD