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hehe thanks ^^ i made a few new changes to my page...added some snow and changed the font... i think it looks lovelier now ^^ thanks for the compliment though, i'm glad you think it's kawaii!

oh no, play time for me is when nothing serious is being done about a situation... it's different here, i'm never an adult in this house, so in the end most decisions are done by my parents. thing is they have no decision making abilities and look out for their own pleasures first, which in the end affects what i'm going to be doing in life greatly...but it's nothing i can't bear with...at least i hope so ^^"
well...not taking a break, till two years i might be taking courses in languages and gaining some job experience... then again i am not sure where...or how or when or...my parents again ^^" erm anyhow...i have faith and i believe things will turn out just fine in the end ^^

hehehe are you sure not the weather?! :P ^^ well ... thanks, i appreciate your friendship and glad to know that you would not mind my rantings if i chose to do so. ^^ be sure it's mutual, if there is anything you need to talk about, i wouold be more than happy to listen and offer my advice if i had any ^^

oh? well my real ambition is to become a psychologist. since i was younger i was always fascinated with the way humans as a whole behave... at times i wanted to be those criminal psychologist...just to understand what are the real motives behind serious crimes, other times i just wanted to be a school councelor...offer an ear and a hand to kids...social worker... they all revolve around the same thing... perhaps i also want to understand myself, why people are so different yet so similar...stuff like that ^^
heheh and i wil be sure to look you up in case i needed it :P

aww about your english test, i wish you told me earlier... actually...hahaha i always score real high on the essays...yet the rest of the exam i am prone to making a few mistakes. on the SAT1 exam i scored a 9 on the essay which was one of the highest in class for one who took it only once, and on the TOEFL (which is another test we need to take for most colleges) i got a 30 out of 30! hehe yeah i was real happy i scored full on the essay...the rest was pretty good... but i follow one "formula" for essay writing. depends on the type of essay, but trust me it works on most, ranging from summaries to persuasive essays.
well what i do, in case you might like advice from a pro and it's thanks to my english teacher, btw she's a novelist, pretty awesome. unfair for me to take credit for what she taught us so here is what it it:
introduction: five sentences. first sentence is general, usually i start out saying "for many years" "since ancient times" "since the beginning of history."
yes, you must have noticed we are talking real general, don't touch the topic yet, talk general, give a glimpse of what you're going to be discussing and then "smooth in" to the topic in the next three sentences, making it less general by the sentence. the fifth sentence is always always always always your thesis statement. what i mean by the thesis statement is almost exactly what you are gonna be talking about. in persuasive essays it would be what you are trying to persuade your reader about. for example you can say. " Thus, juvenile delinquints should not be sent to jail" (heheh a topic we had to write a persuasive essay for and debate. hehe came out top speaker so i do know what i am talking about)

now the perfect essay consists of five paragraphs (unless you are asked more by the teacher, but intro is intro and even if the teacher asks for a million paragraphs, the intro never changes, if you want to add more sentences to the intro, do so before the thesis statement. in other words, the thesis statement is always always always the last sentence of the intro.)

the next two in a five para essay are for support. here you cite examples from daily life, an article you read, something completely made up if you make it sound real, something from history...anything anything. they're paragraphs where you give proofs and examples...like when you argue with your friend. even then when you think your arguement really is not so substantial you make things up just to come out right, ne? for example "it is common knowledge that most delinquints are children or younger teens who come from families that are not so well off or are suffering from major hardships. can you blame a child for setbacks of society? if the gov was able to handle financial issues, would a child need to steal to eat? if parents were more considerate and stopped yelling at each other right across from the child's room, would he feel the need to vent out in public?"
another way is adding some nice saying, and i am not kidding, i searched online for sayings all over and studied them, now they come to me whenever i work on an essay, a good one to use that i did was "desperate times call for desperate measures" and go about explaining why the delinquint is a victim thing is it might not be true, some delinquints just like doing what they do... but i believe they don't and so i prove it! ^^

the fourth para is negation (only in persuasive essays. in the rest it's again just a normal para where you are supporting and citing examples or explaining the topic at hand).
in case you were wondering, negation is where you think of what your friend might say to argue back, almost like searching for weaknesses in your arguement and providing even more support. hmmm it's easier in a debate to negate, when you listen to the opposing side's arguement, then you think of something of a counteraction... you could say here... "while it is true that it's every man for himself, that children are responsible too for their actions and sometimes extreme measures should be taken to make sure they understand that for every sin they have to pay, but the root of the problem was never the child. afterall, it is the duty of society to instill high moral values in the child, and provide all the basic necessities for a healthy lifestyle, if society is lacking, can you expect the child to be unflawed and complete?" hehe ^^ yes i always ask so many questions cuz when the person reads they go "eh?! how am i to answer that?!" and bingo, you hit right on the mark to create a strong arguement.

conclusion is the second important after the intro, if written well, then your essay is real good. in the conclusion, you usually sum up...hmmm, your last sentence has what we call a clincher, it's again a question that leaves the reader with no doubt that you are correct since he will be thinking about the answer which normally doesn't really exist as a plain fact. sometimes you can end it on a cocky note or just a closing phrase... hmmm...trying to think of one for the topic but...my head really is pounding now ^^" ...hmm.... how about "if you take a plant and cut it from the stem, leaving the roots alive and intact, the plant once again grows. similarly, society's corruptions are so. if you stop a corruption from the stem, it regrows. juvenile delinquincy is the stem. however, society in itself is the root, and to stop the plant from ever showing itself, you need to take care of the roots."
erm...something like that ^^"

well to study for an essay you can't, but you can always read. i love reading so perhaps that is the reason my essays turn out well, i read so much that i am familiar with most of the topics and always have examples in mind. ^^

sorry for the late advice, i hope everything went well and i sure hope my advice might help in the future ^^

hehehe my exam went ok, not too good, not that bad ^^" but thanks alot for your wishes ^^
still i have not gotten around to answering your PM. my deepest apologies. i'm not feeling too well today...my head's been hurting since last night...i think i will head to bed in not more than an hour...just waiting for father to return so i won't get scolded... grrrr i feel like smacking my headache and saying "sheesh! i know you hurt! i got the point! can you get over it already!"

*hug* well take care and have a nice time, again i hope things went great ^^
and yes Jared is very cute ^^ i have a brother who's young like him too, mine is 4. such an adorable thing when he is not nagging me for my CD's the way he is not and making my head pound even more ^^"

Hehe well it looks very good ^_^.
I'm actually having Rue revamp my page with Cowboy bebop so be on the look out for it .

Ah I see ^_^. well you know what things always end up working out in the end but we can only up thats coming up soon ^_^. well I'm prayin for things to work out for you ^_^.

lol *hugs* not at all friendships are special and should be cherished and the feeling is mutual I'm here for ya ^_^.

Really? thats really neat ^_^. I'm actually going to one on the 23rd But I'm going for a different reason than you think. I'm required to take one to make sure I'm mentally fit to get government money to go to school ^_^. and to be honest I've alway had the same interest but I wouldn't be able to do it for a living because I'm real quite and shy so I wouldn't really be good at it @_@.

@_@ wow thanks for taking the time *takes notes* what you said right there is more helpful then what any english has ever taught me ^_^. and no advice is to late for it can always be used somewhere some how ^_^. and believe me I'm gunna have to write a ton of essays once in college so I will put your advice to good use.

and I actually like your last exam about and I agree. I don't know about there but here parents let there kids do what ever they want and even if a parent wanted to they can't punish there kids because you can go to jail or lose your kids just for spanking them so kids know no fear of punishment so they do what ever they want and until we as a society start taking action they will keep doing so @_@.

and once again seriously I thank you for that help I really will keep it and put it to good use ^_^.

oh and I love reading ^_^. bigger the book the better ^_^. I pretty much will read any book like all kinds children books documentary type books fiction so on ^_^.

hehe I think I did really well on the test not sure about the essay still lol but I'm sure I did good enough ^_^.

as for the PM don't worry take you time ^_^ don't have to give me excuse you just don't have to answer till your ready to . Lol wouldn't it be nice if thats all we had to do to get ride of a headache ^_^. Hehe I'm sure your awake now but sleep tight and don't let the bed bugs bite. I hope the headache goes away soon :P.

Rahh jareds actually 3 years old born 9/30/03
btw did you check out the photobucket? there must be a hundred of him on there alone hes cute and he loves taking pictures and short movies lol. alot of times hes the one taking pictures he enjoys being in them and taking them ^_^.

ok well take care *hugs*
~Dan

Hi, How are you?

many <3 and appreciation.

P.S. LOVE your new layout! the background picture is just SO CUTE!

i need hrelp i cant make my images go away=(

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hehehe yeah? i'm glad you like my UP ^^ i like it too... hehehe funny thing about thinking you clicked the wrong person's page but i don't blame you :P

hmmm well limit to playtime has nothing really to do with MT or me actually playing games and so on, no i was talking about another type of playtime where you waste your days waiting for your parents to make up their mind over where they want to send you for college or what college to go to. it's not me, i know what i want, i've known for a long time now...and over here i don't pretty much have a choice, yet. i'm patient enough to wait for my parents to stop being silly and careless, but time limit means..in not more than two years i'm going to lead my own life... hehe very complicated story and trust me, nothing you want to know, so i would rather we talk about the weather sure is hot here ^^
...and something about me is that i'm actually very ambitious, and i plan to make something out of myself so i won't skip college for sure ^^ thanks for worrying though and the kind words of advice my friend ^^

aww i saw the pics, very kawaii...i'll reply to the PM asap...buuuuuut...

*whack* don't get dressed for parties yet! i have my chemistry exam in...15 mins! and you can guess, i did not even study well for it....but anyhow i am sure it won't be bad at all... i am...sure yea! ^^" *nods in reassurance*

my Graduation is on the 25 of June... hehe yeah and it starts at night too till the early dawn of the 26th...seriously i hope they don't expect me to stay at the party till 6 am! hahah and btw my school is girls only if you were wondering :P aww and thanks! i will be waiting then for you to pop by...just forget about the champagne, some juice would be appreciated how about...Mango! i love mango juice...but guava will be nice too! hahahahahah ^^

*hugs* thanks! i'm taking care too! stress...hmm...don't worry about me ^^ i'm sure i can handle a few more things at the moment...

have a nice time and party well!
take care!
*wave*
...wish me luck! ^^

Lol yeppers kawaii page ^_^.

oh no thats not what I meant ^_^. By play time I just meant time off from school from doing work you know just relaxing. And everyone want and needs that time off. I just meant don't take to long because the longer your not working the harder it is to get back into the routine ^_^.

And good for you I'm so glad you know what you wanna do so many people don't know but I'm glad you do ^_^. @_@ lol ok I won't ask question about something you don't wanna talk about. And theres nothing I don't mind listening or talking about so can't use that excuse but I won't ask then ^_^.

I really hope things work out for you I hope you become what you want to. erm my I ask what that something is lol. I've told you right? well In case I ain't I want to become an MRI specialist but first I need to get my degree in Radiological technology. haha I hope you never need one but if you ever do get hurt you know to look me up ^_^.

OH noes? you seen meh picture? lol you must mean jared he is very cute ^_^.

What?!? from night to morning? haha thats so weird I've never heard of one like that @_@.
Oh a girls only school thats cool. One thing about schools like that your able to learn better I think.
haha I'll pop by and I'll bring the juice I love the mango but not sure about the other juice not sure I had Oh oh Strawberry banana kiwi Juice . haha I'm glad you said that actually I hate the way Champaign and wine taste actually I hate all alcoholic beverages they all are really nasty tasting to me.

*hugs* I'm glad you feel that away and I hope you stay feeling like that stress bites not to mention is so unhealthy for you eats away at you innards trust me I know @_@.

Haha guess what? I have a test in about 6 hours I have to Take an English test
whats worse yet is I'm horrible at writing essays. I made a 100 hundred the Texas Assessment Test which compares you to how smart you are with others but I failed it because I wrote a poor essay I can't believe I can be the Dumbest smart person . Got every question right but wrote bad essay agh I'm never gunna let myself forget that

oh and I didn't study for my test coming up haha but how do you study for writeing a essay.
I don't know what it even is lol O well trying not to worry ^_^. haha wish me luck .

Well good Luck *hugs* I'll find a bald guy and rub his head for you lol.
Take care and GOOD LUCK do your best and you think its easy so It will be ^_^.
Bye *hugs*
~Dan

hi
hope your last exam went well I will have to go monday just to let you know that i will miss you
bi

Greetings Sara.......... dropping by randomly again..............
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Well.... hope you are doing well and I'll see you again

Yea I got a shout out! . Well I got my newest vid up so check it out please.

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hahahas well don't mention it, glad you are having fun and everything is going well on your end ^^

well it's same here, when school is over i will be going to college too...i think heheh since i donno much about what i can manage to do...my parents are weird and they always change their minds...but anyway ^^ got a few plans...and a time limit for how long i will play around till i think it's time to get serious :P

heheh *stops chasing you* well you make a valid point hehehe... well i only got three exams left now, the last one though is next saturday... got two this week... then... GRADUATION PREPARATION hehehe going out to buy a dress for our party... gonna be fun...

hahahahas hope you get rich and blabla and make all your dreams come true Danworth-chan! ^^

well we have computer classes, that was out of our programming book :P the exam went really well if you are wondering... was rather easy ^^

hahah *hugs* thanks for the invitations! you're sure to be invited to all of mine ahahaha...
take care and have a nice time! enjoy every minute!
hope to see you around!
*wave*

where am I @_@ lol I though I clicked on wrong persons page at first .
I really like the page ^_^.

lol limiting your play time? haha I can't set a time limit I'm really trying to get things together but its
hard alot of things I have to do and alittle confusing trying to get money for school and all @_@.

Don't joke like that you gots to go to college ^_^ you can do so much more with your self with a college degree ^_^. but yes I understand it can be hard to decide on what you wanna do and many people don't know and switch careers once they get older because they got into the wrong field. ? don't let your parents decide for you this is a decision you have to make for your self or did I misunderstand what you said @_@.

Hehe I forgot to share my graduation pictures didn't I? well I'll send you a PM here in a second ^_^.
so whens your actual graduation date? I want to be sure to pop by with the champaign ^_^.

lol thanks for the wishes and same wishes for you ^_^.

*hugs* haha thanks *gets dressed* ok lets party
Hehe I'm trying and you to take care and enjoy yourself don't stress to much ^_^.
Hope to see you to *hugs*
~Dan

*squeals* AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW I love it! ^.^

Arigato. Thanks again Sara

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Hiya little sis! I hope you're having fun with your user page.
I guess I need to make us a little friendship banner too, because you're such a sweet person! Don't ever let anyone tell you different! *hugs* Bye!

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Aww... you're new page looks great sis! I love it! *hugs*
The color scheme is wonderful. Its very calm and soothing!

hiiii
soo happy you liked it
many thanks for the fav on my Kaliedo Star wall "Circus Magic"

Thanks for the fav on Listening for trains....
take care

i like what youve done to your page lolim up to nuttin lol im just bored do u got a yahoo massenger?

Thanks for the fav for my Gravity ReDefined wall!

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hahahah interesting! never been to a water park in general hahahahas! but if i can predict that anything crazy would happen like the one in your gif...i would never leave the comfort of my room! hehe

well glad things are great...physics was really good...only three exams left but it's two this week and one the next satruday... i am so bored i don't wanna study today... grr father is home too...soo annoying i wish he would leave... ^^"

take care Jas-kun! have a nice time and hope to see you around...

heheh remember those times when sis and i first joined MT, spammers? hilarious :P
Ja na!

lol but it would be fun water sliding xDDD

my friend just got his physics degree, he's striving to get a phD tho to become elite xDDD he loves the stuff....

yo pappa is teh mahn that puts teh roof ever j00r hed... y u no like him?

ya, those times when we would goof off xDDD all teh time, the mods muted meh... well, one did that had no sense of humor.... lololol