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Quote by mintleafLolz. Hiyas acid. I was waiting for your comment ^_^. Yea....I do get what you mean...I really didn't notice till you pointed that out ....hmm...maybe I shoulda made the arm and foorearm wider...
Honestly I didn't really think that much about the other leg at first (gues I thot the dress covering it up would be a good excuse to cheat on that. Lolz ) Before I submitted the work, it did cross my mind tho... that it shud be somewhere in front of the left leg....but uh...was tired of working on it already so I left it there, hoping no one wud notice. Lolz

Lol, glad to be of good help again :P but I say it's better than anything I could've done lol... I'm not too good with patience so I kno how it feels lol.

Hehe. Not really. If you'd done it, it would probably hv better anatomy. Lolz. But yea, takes a lotta patience (and boredom) to do the complete list from drawing to coloring. Anyway thx for d comments! c ya around! (*mutters* 'time to get back to the next one')

Quote by acid-awakeningWow soooooooooooooooooooooo many swords
I like the sky, and maybe you could add some blood in the sword at the very front?

I tried that already, it just looks like a red blob Lol

Quote by acid-awakeningWow, nicely done, hard to draw from a low angle shot.
Her hand is a bit too big if you compare it to the forearm and bicep, it's like... Woah! o.O, you know what I mean?
The feet I can understand because it really does come out at the screen, but where is the other leg?
Overall you did a good job

Lolz. Hiyas acid. I was waiting for your comment ^_^. Yea....I do get what you mean...I really didn't notice till you pointed that out ....hmm...maybe I shoulda made the arm and foorearm wider...
Honestly I didn't really think that much about the other leg at first (gues I thot the dress covering it up would be a good excuse to cheat on that. Lolz ) Before I submitted the work, it did cross my mind tho... that it shud be somewhere in front of the left leg....but uh...was tired of working on it already so I left it there, hoping no one wud notice. Lolz

Quote by acid-awakeningFeet's too straight, hands too distorted, the one on the left side of the page... the palm is facing the back right? the thumb is at the bottom, but do correct me if i'm wrong, because I don't see knuckles either.

Thanks for the critic.I try to improve more.

Quote by acid-awakeningUhm, i dont think that hair is big enough to cover her other eye, i think the tip of it should at least be seen with only that amount covered up.
Her wings look like warehouse wings, from that im just tryna say that it looks too plain, sorta dead.
and i dont think blush marks have outlines, you made the outlining over it too dark.

hahax... thanks for the comment and tips...

Quote by acid-awakeningRandom but good idea.
Perhaps spending more time on it would make it a lot better but I like the idea of it.

Thanks for the comment! haha, yeah, I definitely have problems when it comes to working on things for a long time. I have this mentality that everything has to be done in one sitting, and this was done in two sittings and it bothered me. lol. I need to work on that. Thanks!

true true you always gotta think positive. now i just gotta find a good film school. how's your dream coming along.

merged: 05-23-2007 ~ 04:46pm
ah , i see, actually i also thought about that, and i'm actually pretty good at drawing but i guess i would like directing films better., maybe i'll direct an anime movie one day. i also started thinking about making mangas, i have about four in the works but for some reason thaose stories started becoming scripts. lol

Thanks for the comment,now that realy realy helps me ,i didnt even think about that.thanks for noticing me,i should edit it.

thx for the coment for my wall "crazy". unfortunately it has been delated... i dont know why... uh... shame...

take care and thanks once more

merged: 05-21-2007 ~ 03:00pm

Quote by acid-awakeningI dunno why, I liked it but perhaps it was a little bit too simplistic even with all those lines and curves everywhere.

You're probably right. maybe if there was some kind of anime stuff whey would accept my wall (; nevermind... but I'm glad that someone liked my work (: thanks man!

Quote by acid-awakeningWahhh isn't she foxy
Excellent toning and shading

Thank you!

Quote by acid-awakeningAhh the classics
background colour you used are different to the hair, I guess it's a good use of seperation but you did have the white glow effect around your character.

Konnichiwa!
Thanks for your comment on my doujinshi

Quote by acid-awakeningThe girl is pretty buff compared to the guy, the shoulders are pretty high up but other than that gj

Hi again! Thx for adding me to ur watchlist. Her shoulders are high up on purpose cos I was trying to make her look a bit shy. Maybe she looks buff cos of her clothes? Hehe. How do u tell? Is it the shoulders? My anat still sux. Btw, I wasn't trying to cheat on the hands in case u r wondering. Haha. I just ran out of paper cos I drew em at the bottom of it.

merged: 05-16-2007 ~ 08:28pm
No problem with the watchlist thing. I think she looks more buff than shy, why? because the shoulders aren't as angled high enough to look shy, when you look at it, it's sort of flat like the horizon and also, if you wanted to express the shyness, you could of made her blush a bit with a little bit of cross-hatching perhaps?

Ooo! U mean angle the shoulders upwards more....yeaa...i think i get it. Okies! Cross-hatching? I guess the ones under her left eye are too pathetic to be noticed huh. Lolz. Shulda made em longer. Thx! Hope I'll be able to fix my anat some day. sigh. but it took a whole yr of doodling jz to get the faces right. think the body arms and legs will take longer, what more clothes folds. Anyways, thx for taking time to critique!

Quote by acid-awakeningHand is too big, bigger than the face, forearm too long, longer than the area from the shoulder to the elbow. other than that gj

Ah! Yea, you're right. Lolz. So much for trying to follow CLAMP's proportion huh. Think I went overboard a little. Now that I look at it, the head looks kinda large too. O well. Back to the drawing board. Maybe I shud look up some anatomy before that. ^^ Haha. Thx for taking time to analyze and critique! Appreciate it.

Quote by acid-awakeningGood shading pose and proportions there
The angle of the raquet is very good (raquet lol i think that's how it's spelt)
anyway... Facial expression is good too... I always have a hard time doing that
Forgot what else I was gonna say LOL sorry
But whateva... This is awesome

hehe. thanks so much.

merged: 05-12-2007 ~ 01:57pm

Quote by acid-awakeningWow, a load of shading. The girl's right eye isn't quite aligned to her left but other than that, it's great!

thank you very much acid-san! glad you liked it. ^^

Quote by acid-awakeningHaha, Looks like your paper is always old-film eh?
I haven't see too many of these kinda pictures lately (ones that come up to the page)
Very good as always, very very good Danielly

hehe thanks for the kind words ^^
and yeah me love that kind of papaer
i use a cream paper 200g
i think the doujinshi comes out even more lovely ^^
thanks again ^^

Quote by acid-awakeningCant tell if this is a guy or a girl, face deffinately needs to have the jaws lowered and alined to the mouth, not the nose
If this is a guy, then he's deffinately too skinny, but other than that i say its a job well done ^^

Well, I copied what's on the picture. I'll try to find if there's a scan here on MT. She's a girl, her name is Meia Gisborn from the anime Vandread. Thanks for the comment! I'll try to improve on the jaw part...

Gel~

merged: 05-05-2007 ~ 02:54pm

Quote by acid-awakeningThe bones just below the neck is at a quite steep angle don't you think?
You could also try making the eye with more lighter tones making it look alive and circular, coz it kinda looks flat and dead. Speaking of the eye, it's well alined but drifting too far off the head, the width of the eye should be a 5th of the face width if you're looking straight on. This one is only slightly tilted, so you could still follow that rule. Anyway, I realise this is anime and not realism but just thought you might want to know, or it could be just the anime style is like that?

Good thing that you realized that this is anime, not realism. It depends on what anime style you are drawing. Anime doesn't require perfection. But I could use those advices when I'm going to draw real people. Thanks anyway!

Gel~

Quote by acid-awakeningColour use is really good, I especially like the eyes, looks alive.

for the comment on my artwork

Quote by acid-awakeningthe bg blends in well. nice work.

Thanks for the comment~

merged: 04-30-2007 ~ 09:38pm

Quote by acid-awakeningWahh, good choice of scan to vector
Lines and colours great as usually expected.

I thought it was a good choice too
Thanks a bunch for the comment!

Just stopping by to thank you for the comment. I know that the lower portion of her looks paper like, infact her whole body looks paper like to me. But I left it like that because I didnt want to add too much detail on account I was going to color it, and did. It looks much better now. I may upload. But anyway, take care and thanks.

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Quote by republicsoldierI'd like to work for Ubisoft.

haha I also wanted to work for Ubisoft but now my dream job would be the Army

I guess that tells me why you chose your mt name that. ^_^
Haha, well i've heard stories about the army from a soldier live... it seems to be extremely cool . He said not to be afraid when it comes to having to come to wars coz they train you good.

is it that easy why I chose that name ^^ no really I was not really thinking what kind of name I wanted just wanted to make a account and now I want to change it
well I'm not afraid of going into a war I just want to experience a war ^^ but untill I really have experienced one than I can really decide if i'm afraid of it or not ^^

Quote by acid-awakeningWhat you've done here is good, if this was a long time ago I would have been surprised, but this theme of cloud and moon is too overused. It's good, but not anything new.

hehe i know. i origiinally made the bg for my computer class and when i logged on to mt my artistic lvl was low so i just stuck a pic on it to make an anime wallie but i think my artistic lvl went down...OMG! oh well...

Quote by acid-awakeningHumm, is that someone holding it?
Anyway, very well done.

Lol, thanks for the comment!