Quote by acid-awakeningHeyy, just dropping by to say thanks for the fav on my latest wall. Cheerz.

Hi there Acid-awakening

No problem with the fav 'cause it was well deserved. Your latest wall is really nice so keep up the great work.
Well, take it easy and see ya around.

Quote by acid-awakeningThe brunette up front is very good, next best from that i'll say the blonde... the rest could use some more added details... green haired girl needs her hand more alined according to the grass.

Thanks for the comment! Yeah, I agree that Miyu is the best drawn character, cause she's . As for the green haired girl (Ayumi) Her hand is short... I should work on that.... Thanks again!

Gel~

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Quote by KyuotoMeow *Makes a cat face* Only girls can have cat ears and cat tails so they get nine lives
After all, if you go for animation, make some anime!
You can make some cool games.....after all.....we need some good first personshooter games Something more fun.....magic and gun!
If you aren't good, you will always have a challenge. Challenges don't walk to you either

Haha, make anime ~ yeah I want to... BUT DAMN! who's gonna buy me the program >.> Hahaha. I can make big bucks after I have the program. xD

Lose money, and gain alot, lose more and get alot more. And eventually ending up a millionaire xD

Yup. Just get the program first. Don't forget that you have to be good first You can lose quite a lot if you don't get that good at it but it's still good to try.
You can be a millionaire if you do make a good anime series......
Hmmmmm......action series?

Quote by acid-awakeningWow, his leg is awfully bent far back, looks uncomfortable.
I think for a scene like this you could've had the left leg tucked behind the right.
Other than that, it's very good

thanks for the comment i'll try to pay more attention

Quote by acid-awakeningHere you have a lot of tones and shades in the hair, the hair is excellent although you need to even out the toning more in the face and clothing.
But it's very good as an example to people of different shade use. And what you've done with the eyes is outstanding, the reflection is curved which shows the eye is not flat but curved. Well done.

Thanks for the comment! Some helpful advice from you indeed. Thanks again!
Where in NZ? In Auckland?

Gel~

Quote by acid-awakeningVery good, very original although I think if you make the base shatter at the face it would give a much more evil show

Thanks for the comment on Reflection
I really appreciate it.

...hello! thanks for the comment! i promise to improve on it!...if i have time....^_^; hehe..anyways..you rock!

Quote by acid-awakeningJust a few things you could improve for this scene.
Have the girl's arms bent rather than super stiff, doesn't look relaxing... and you can't really rest stiff armed, plus her shoulders are coming above the neck slightly even though her back is straight, meaning she's tensed.
And in case you didn't know, guys don't like to sit knees touching each other. ^^

Yeah I know... Super stiff? Yup I agree. I am trying to improve... Desperately! Hahaha. You're good with body proportions. Can you criticize my works so I can make them better? It would really help. Oh, guys don't like that kind of thing? Oh, I get it. Makes them look kinda gay. Haha. You know, I've seen you post comments around MT and I think you're good at giving comments. Some guy (i cant remember) said that your comment post was harsh. I don't believe so, I think its called constructive criticism, don't you think? I like you. You're frank and observant. Hope to hear more from you!

PS. You live in NZ?

Gel~

hi... erm i still feel the hip looks crazy i think you should do something about it lol... but good job on cleaning up the page. the previous submisson looked like yr scanner exploded while scanning the work or smth. maybe u might want to redraw it? and try to get the hip in place next time?

Quote by acid-awakeningEek xD Sooo good!
The background matches with the blue of her hair and clothing well.
But an idea, seeing you added some snow falling, maybe a blizzardy background might work? anyway... its a suggestion.

Thanks for the comment, but it's not snow, so I can't really make it into a blizzard

Quote by acid-awakeningIts good however, I see you try to add depth to the picture by having the arm hung back but I think (in my oppinion) you need to make it thicker because if it were that small, it would be about 5-6 metres away from the shot.
I won't comment on proportions and skip to the bg... You could make her in a restaurant resting against the chair with the window behind her showing a garden.

thanks for the suggestions:D
most of my original chracters are lanky, i hope this explains why the arm was drwan in that manner. anw thanks for the comments:D
-pokomotto

merged: 04-07-2007 ~ 12:44am

Quote by acid-awakeninglol, norine07: wow not bad!
LOL! that reallllyy helps doesn't it? haha jk jk
ok, a few more things here you might wanna know... since the guys cape is drawn to the left side of the picture i'm guessing because of the wind?
anyway... if you want that to happen then you need to add more windy effects on the hair... speaking of hair, the hair you did on the female character is really good... you could've evened it out a bit more with the guy's cause right now it's a bit bulky.

with regards to the 'bulkiness' of the hair of the guy, please check one of the trc scans on mt. theres a reason why i clarified that it's reference work in the description:D

Quote by acid-awakeningsince amazing is overused, along with excellent and a whole bunch of other words... I'll give an "plain" oppinion.

I like the simplistic "style" but I just think your glow and fade in the character drags the wall down a bit

Thank you for your feedback on my latest wallpaper "Es war einmal..."!
Glad that you like it! :3

thnx for the comments on Lolipon and Risako sugaya! im glad u took the time to give contstrucitive crit, as most people just say, "kawaii" or somehin.

Yep i know what you mean, and thanks again for your comment i realy love hearing peoples honest opiuns ^_^

Quote by acid-awakeningHaven't seen anything like this lately ^^ very well done
Tired of my comments on angles eh? haha, well the bg you certainly did a good job with it

no, I'm not tired! actually, it's kinda cool that I have someone that tells me when I make something wrong!
I must thank you!

Have a nice day!

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I'm not perfect, and I usually have a lot of mistakes in what I draw but to improve, try to fix those slight mistakes, cause they do make a difference ^^

well, we maybe not able to fix our 100% mistakes but at least we have done our best. Sometimes when we try to fix or make our artwork better again and again it's just cause our artwork really horrible or looks too stiff...well, i'll try to fix my slight mistakes step by step

btw, thanks for your advice have a nice day~!

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Hehe, damn cats eh :P
Animator = fun, as soon as I can get a program
Game = not so tough as I already make my own games using a few programs
But I can never be too good to not get a challenge

Meow *Makes a cat face* Only girls can have cat ears and cat tails so they get nine lives
After all, if you go for animation, make some anime!
You can make some cool games.....after all.....we need some good first personshooter games Something more fun.....magic and gun!
If you aren't good, you will always have a challenge. Challenges don't walk to you either

Quote by acid-awakeningLol, a mole on her face... that's certainly something you don't see everyday
The shine in the hair and shading is uneven comparing to the clothes
It's like say using pencil and crayon... ofcourse the detail is gonna be much much different. That's just what im saying about the cbalance of colour.
And either her hair is puffy or she is anerexic, in other words, the body needs enlargement or the head needs shrinking down.
And you've done the same mistakes i've done with the eye, the shine is the same, but light only comes from one direction, it would hit one eye more than the other so the shine should have a slight difference.

Hey there,
thanks again for your useful comments. Any tips how to draaw better?
i think your comments gives me more courage to make my own doujinshis next time. Domo arigato!
;) have a nice day~!

thx for the comment on my drawin now i kno wat was lookin so funny

Quote by acid-awakeningA job of one where you can get more freedom... Perhaps, being in a band... You get to travel the world

hha~ not really...band is still tied up by the company's plans. author of travel books would be ideal ^^

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Practice makes perfect ^^ Although, humans can never be too good to not improve

The more we know, the more we "DON't" know

Yup, i'm sure agree with you

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Hehe, well that's still coz there's so much I wanna do one life can't fit all. Know what I mean?
hehe well I do wanna be an animator or be a part of a game crew

Haha. I wish i could do everything. One life? Too bad we don't have nine lives
Animator = fun Only if you can make it work
Game crew = fun Also the same
but hey, doing anything would be fun