Quote by AlfonseHmm, this is a pretty
plain, yet good vector Hana-chan.
This vector is almost exactly like the scan thing you got it from.
The thing is, your vectoring isn't smooth and/or straight. I'm sure with
practice, you'll get it.
But the thing's I noticed were:
1.) Her hair, and I know you mentioned how hard it was, but see, some of the
strands of hair are somewhat small and really "blocky" and not
"round" or "curvy."
2.) I also noticed her face and arm, when I payed close attention to her body, I
noticed jagged lines, like sharp lumps from her arm and neck. So I suggest you
take more time to smoothen out the "outlines" or whatever you call
them.
And as for the background, I think it's rather nice, cause I like Spider-Man.
n_n The webbing's pretty nice, I agree that the ending has a more realistic web,
but yours is different, and diversity is good.
Anyway, overall, you did a nice job, and I hope to see more vectors from ya. n_n
Also take into consideration this is constructive criticism, and I'm tryin to
help you out. So keep it up yeah?
Helloo...Alfonse-kun. Oh, thank
you for your comment. Aah, you don't have to worry about your criticism. I won't
take it to heart. Beside we learn from what other see, eh? I like trying out new
technics. Since I know where is my error, I will do much better next time.
Thanks to you. See-ya later. *waves*
Hello Child! I just hopped on today ( finally xD ) Nice new drawings! They look
really awsome. Sorry I missed your birthday. so.. Happy belated Birthday! I
gotta run for now. So bye.
Quote by AlfonseErm, just one quick thing
I wanna point out, this description is one of the few shortest descriptions
you've done so far. xD
Anyway, the wall is somewhat plain, not a lot of stuff done to it, 'cept the
whole flashy dancing light comin out of the girl's hand.
Pertty cool Chloe, and you've vectored the scan nicely, once again. n_n
Welp, that is all from me. Keep it up aye?
Thanks for the comments on "Wild Arms"!
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Quote by AlfonseI dunno why, but at a
glance, this girl looked like Fay(sp?) from Cowboy Bebop.
And I think the scan looks lovely. xD
But there's only one problem for me, and that's the font. It's nice but kinda
dark for the dark bg, know what I mean? So it's hard to notice, then again, I
have horrible eye sight.
Anyway, I like this one alot, so it's goin to meh favs. n_n
Thanks a bunch for the comment and fav on "Paint my Life"! Wow, I
never thought of Faye! A lot of people ask me if the girl is from Nana or
something~
I'll see what I can do about the font =D
Oi Alfonse-kun!
Gomen nasai for mailing you back so late.
I was caught up in yet again another project. The thing that sucked though, was
that the same day that I turned in my Spanish project I got a project on Mexico.
But I finally finished it. I really hope I don't have another one for awhile.
Well I've been good. Still busy.
Even though volleyball season is technically over since my school's varsity team
made it to the play-offs and I was invited to come with them, its seems that I
have a few more practices left.
So how have you been?
So you're still working hard on your manga. That's great. I wonder if you can
post your story somewhere when you get finished.
Hmm. So you're wondering if you should color it or not. Well personally I thing
the character will look more menacing in black and white with some good
shading.
Hey I did check out your videos. I liked them both. Especially the first one.
You were right that is one of AFKG more comical videos.
Hey I found out that I do have Yahoo messenger. The only problem is that I have
no clue how to use it. Guess I'll have to look into that one too.
Well that's about it from me.
Ja matta ne Yamichi ^_^
P.S Yea I did check out the link. It's a great site. I never knew there were so
many AFKG songs and it's great that there are samples of them.
Where are you planning to work at? I'm working in the Medical product
development industry. I "seal" medical kits and work at the warehouse
for shipment preparation. No, I haven't been to college. I wanted to work first
because my family has too much bills and debt. Grants or loans and other
benefits for college are just for college, I can't use the money to help my
family out. If I was in college, my folks would be in trouble. My mom works two
jobs and my dad works as a temporary contractor. In other words, not enough
money at all! Especially when my dad finishes a project and won't get paid for
months at a time. I wanna go to college, get a job, and get outta my house
before I get any older! Yet, I can't abandon my parents. Thier very special to
me. Well, thats all and remember to think not about the difficulty, but about
what you can get from it.
Quote by AlfonseYou know, I've never seen
this anime, but all the images and scans look awesome.
And this one's no exception. Like someone said, it looks like a painting the way
you worked with the scan and whatnot. And the grass ain't all that bad, at least
I don't think so. .::shrugs::.
And I don't think you spelled dying wrong. I do believe that's how it's spelled,
but if you dun believe me, go get a dictionary and look it up. xD
Anyway, nice job Chloe. I gotta add this to meh favs. .::clicks fav button::.
n_n
Welp, keep these wallies comin'. .::waves::.
Thanks for the comment and fav on "The Dying Summer"!
Quote by Toya999
well, your drawings were really great.......and everytime i see a lovely avatar
or an interesting username in my way, i like checking out the person's page, and
i like the name Alphonse from FMA....it's nice.....well and and also i love FMA
a lot....it's a really great 10/10 anime.......really successful.....well thanx
for replying....^__^
Hello again Toya-chan.
Thank you for the nice thought, I'm glad you like my artwork and all.
Hehe, so it's all my avatar eh? That's what attracted you to my page and
drawings? Cool.
You like the name Alphonse too. Nice. n_n
And I'm glad to see another FMA lover. You should consider joining our group: The
Full-Metal-Alchemist-FC <---
Anyway, I thought FMA was really successful too. Awesome plot, and the story
tied in so well to real life events which was totally cool to me. xD
Anyway, I'm off now, nice talkin to ya. .::waves::.
aregato des ne Alfonse-kun.....^__^
yup i do really love the name Alphonse a lot, it's cool and unique....^__^....i
don't like the name Edward...^__^
yup....i'm crazy over FMA, it's my second fav anime....it's so cool and great it
made me burst into tears in some parts of the anime......hehehhee....when one of
my best friends came over last year, i showed her the part at the funeral, when
the lieutenant dies and his little girl starts crying at her father's death, me
and my friend started crying....hehhehe...it was funny we made a scenery...i
told her to stop crying, i didn't want my parents to come and get
shocked...hehehe....eventhough i'm not so sensitive, i was shocked....how come i
cried?.....the storyline and plot were great, u know some anime make 51
episodes, and the anime gets boring in the end, it's like an over-streched
story....but in FMA, damn it's my 2nd favorite cause Ayashi no Ceres is my
1st.....
and again aregato des ne.....Alphonse-kun...oh one more thing i need to tell
u....
thanks to your avatar and username, i was wondering....hmmmm....who was that
person.....heh.....and there u are.....i went and checked out your
userpage.....hehehe...i was curious to see who was that person....^__^
and again...aregato des Alphonse-kun...^__^
Quote by AlfonseHey TrigunPreacherGirl!
How's it goin? Just stoppin by cause I haven't been seeing you around lately,
and wanted to see you're doin. And to see if you're still alive and whatnot. xD
And I was wonderin whatever happened to your drawings, you haven't been
submitting anymore. (I'm the one to talk...haven't drawn anything in forever)
Welp, that's all for me. I'll talk to ya later.
.::waves::.
I haven't been able to work on many drawings, and my scanner's software needs to
be "registered" online, or something .
Mostly, though, it's the time constraints.
Quote by AlfonseHey there Hybrid-san.
Thanks for droppin by.
Meh, I've been okay I suppose. Alot of projects and school work to do now. It
really gets kinda hectic. But what about you, how've you been? What've you been
up to lately and all that jazz.
What's this thing in your title box. Defensive trainee. Are you like learnin
martial arts or somethin. Or did you just put that for the heck of it. xD
Welp, I'll be seein' ya later aye? ^^ v .::peace
out::.
I see. I'm past case studies and school projects since high school. Remember to
strive hard to get that "A"! Me? I've been working! Yep, my life ain't
all that jazzy either. That will come when feel much more at peace.... About my
occupation, well I did take weapon based martial arts. I dislike sharp objects
yet I'm fond of swords. Weird huh? I'm not being trained anymore. Martial arts
to me is something I use to keep my mind off things that cloud it. Like I said,
finding peace. Well, see ya later.
Quote by Toya999hiii, hehhehee, just
dropped by cause i liked your avatar...anyways nice visiting your page...and
nice drawings u got there....^__^
Hello there Toya-person.
Hehe, thanks for stoppin by my page and checking our my doujinshi. I'm glad you
liked 'em. And I give you even more thanks for faving my Heavenly Angel
doujinshi. I really appreciate it.
By the way, you seem to like my avy quite a bit. Are you an Ed fan? Or do you
just love FMA overall. xD
Welp, I'll be seeing ya later. .::waves::.
well, your drawings were really great.......and everytime i see a lovely avatar
or an interesting username in my way, i like checking out the person's page, and
i like the name Alphonse from FMA....it's nice.....well and and also i love FMA
a lot....it's a really great 10/10 anime.......really successful.....well thanx
for replying....^__^
Oi Alfonse-kun!
It's about time that I got my messages in on time. I'll try to keep it up but
there's no telling how long that will last.
I guess that we will be trilinguals soon. Cool.
Yep, volleyball is coming to an end. I'll miss it but I really could use a break
and focus more on my school work.
I don't think I'll do anything with basketball this year. My friends want me to
play, but it's too much of a hassle.
So you're continuing with your Mercenaries manga. That's great. I can't wait to
see how it turn out. So do you have a name for your next character.
I wish you the best of luck on your contest.
Sorry I haven't checked on your videos yet. But I will, then I'll tell you what
I think.
Thanks for the link, I'll be sure to check it out.
I think I have a messenger. I'm not really sure because I don't use it. I'll let
you know about that one tool
Well that's about it from me.
Quote by AlfonseHey, another awsome
vector. hehe
I remember this image from your previous wall.
Now the image is so much clearer cause the wall was so dark.
Anyway, it's perfect as usual. But I don't know what you see in this guy.
He's got monkey feet. xD
Anyway, nice job again, and I can't wait for another piece.
Much thanks for the comment on my L vector!
Monkey feet?! No way! He is so cool
Quote by AlfonseWell, it's been a while
since I've last seen any work from ya my friend.
First off, I think the idea is nice. Though I can't say this is your best piece.
It's the grass that I'm really noticing. You need to make it more realistic.
Grass isn't normally a lime-green color.
If you fixed that up by making it darker to make it look more realistic it'd be
a great piece.
I personally like the sky and the stuff blowin in the wind, it's just that
grass, just too bright.
Anyway, it's a fine piece overall. So keep it up aye?
Helllloooooo! Alfonse-kun. So happy to get a comment from you. Sorry for having
not in contact with you for a long time. You know that time has come. It's
almost the end of the year 2006. So...load of revision and exam paper.
Yeah... I notice about the grass too. But if you're in my country, those color
do fit well.
Anyway, thanks for the lovely comment. I'm sure you're busy with your papers
too. Good luck all the way. Oh, and here's a gift for you. Ganbatte!
Oi Alfonse-kun!
Gomen gomen. I'll admit that I've gotten quite behind on my messages. I had a
major project to complete in science so that was a major set back.
But it's finished..and now I have a project in Spanish. Great.
Well I'll get started on that later.
So how have you been?
Hey, I didn't know that your birthday was in November. I also didn't know new
stuff came out in November. I'll have to keep that in mind.
So you took Spanish too? Did you think it was hard? I guess it's okay. I have to
take Spanish for two years too, but I don't mind it.
Well that's about it from me.
Ja ne Yamichi ^_^
P.S Fear not! I'll still keep trying to get my messages in on time ^_^
P.S.S I think that the new animes are great. I had no idea that the same person
was the voice for Vash and Ichigo! Now that I think about it they do sound a lot
alike.
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Oi Alfonse-kun!
I'm doing great! Wow I actually understood what you said. Hmm maybe this spanish
thing isn't that hard
Thanks for being so understanding. But I shouldn't be so busy for much longer.
Vollyball season will end in about two weeks.
Yea, I'm taking Biology this year. Actually that was what my project was on.
Yay! Thanks for the help Yamichi. I shouldn't need too much help though.
Funny, I have a 98 in spanish right now.
Wow, it's seems like you have been busy too. That's a lot of projects in such
little time.
Ya know now that I think about it lots of new things do come out in November
since it's so close to Christmas. Guess I never really thought about it
That's great that you're doing another doujin! It's been awhile since you've
uploaded one.
So, I bet you can guess my next question. What's it going to be?
Alfonse! So sorry for the uber-late response!
Remeber when you asked me what "tags" were? Well, I guess when you
achieve a certain level of participation or something, you get tags. If you look
on my userpage, it says, "renowned artist,critic". And I only noticed
this today, so it wasn't there yesterday (and yesterday I was level 69 and today
I'm 70, soo...)
But when I looked at other people's pages, like Chichiri1907, it says nothing,
and she has a higher artistic level than me... So maybe it's our participation
level? I'm trying to see what it says for others, but that's proving rather
difficult... let's check out Sheqel's page...
Ok, see for him it says, "renowned artist,renowned scanner,forumgoer"
but I don't see anything for some other mods, so I dunno what's going on with
that... Kuroimisa has "renowned artist, forumgoer"
And can you see the number of credits you have, or is there something up with my
account?
See you soon!
Wats up? Thanks for visiting me on my gb. I've recently came back after 4 months
or so. Yeah, life is demanding sometimes. Well, take care Alfonse. I see you got
a new avy. Fullmetal is indeed a interesting anime.
Helloo...Alfonse-kun.
Oh, thank
you for your comment. Aah, you don't have to worry about your criticism. I won't
take it to heart. Beside we learn from what other see, eh? I like trying out new
technics. 
Since I know where is my error, I will do much better next time.
Thanks to you. See-ya later. *waves*
Hello Child! I just hopped on today ( finally xD ) Nice new drawings! They look really awsome. Sorry I missed your birthday. so.. Happy belated Birthday! I gotta run for now. So bye.
I send you many birthday wishes for you sixteenth birthday! Have lots of fun!
http://img59.imageshack.us/slideshow/player.php?id=img59/4493/11624303484tk.smil
I hope you like my slideshow!
Ja ne ^_~
Hi Al, Have a happy Haloween.
O.Ox woah awesome page and gallery. Any how welcome to the Japanese group.
Thanks for the comments on "Wild Arms"!
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Thanks a bunch for the comment and fav on "Paint my Life"! Wow, I never thought of Faye! A lot of people ask me if the girl is from Nana or something~
I'll see what I can do about the font =D
Oi Alfonse-kun!
Gomen nasai for mailing you back so late.
I was caught up in yet again another project. The thing that sucked though, was that the same day that I turned in my Spanish project I got a project on Mexico. But I finally finished it. I really hope I don't have another one for awhile.
Well I've been good. Still busy.
Even though volleyball season is technically over since my school's varsity team made it to the play-offs and I was invited to come with them, its seems that I have a few more practices left.
So how have you been?
So you're still working hard on your manga. That's great. I wonder if you can post your story somewhere when you get finished.
Hmm. So you're wondering if you should color it or not. Well personally I thing the character will look more menacing in black and white with some good shading.
Hey I did check out your videos. I liked them both. Especially the first one. You were right that is one of AFKG more comical videos.
Hey I found out that I do have Yahoo messenger. The only problem is that I have no clue how to use it. Guess I'll have to look into that one too.
Well that's about it from me.
Ja matta ne Yamichi ^_^
P.S Yea I did check out the link. It's a great site. I never knew there were so many AFKG songs and it's great that there are samples of them.
Where are you planning to work at? I'm working in the Medical product development industry. I "seal" medical kits and work at the warehouse for shipment preparation. No, I haven't been to college. I wanted to work first because my family has too much bills and debt. Grants or loans and other benefits for college are just for college, I can't use the money to help my family out. If I was in college, my folks would be in trouble. My mom works two jobs and my dad works as a temporary contractor. In other words, not enough money at all! Especially when my dad finishes a project and won't get paid for months at a time. I wanna go to college, get a job, and get outta my house before I get any older! Yet, I can't abandon my parents. Thier very special to me. Well, thats all and remember to think not about the difficulty, but about what you can get from it.
Thanks for the comment and fav on "The Dying Summer"!
Hey there Al!
It's been a while since i last came to your page
I forgot to include this in the pm (sorry)
On my wallpaper! *hugs*
take care!
aregato des ne Alfonse-kun.....^__^
yup i do really love the name Alphonse a lot, it's cool and unique....^__^....i don't like the name Edward...^__^
yup....i'm crazy over FMA, it's my second fav anime....it's so cool and great it made me burst into tears in some parts of the anime......hehehhee....when one of my best friends came over last year, i showed her the part at the funeral, when the lieutenant dies and his little girl starts crying at her father's death, me and my friend started crying....hehhehe...it was funny we made a scenery...i told her to stop crying, i didn't want my parents to come and get shocked...hehehe....eventhough i'm not so sensitive, i was shocked....how come i cried?.....the storyline and plot were great, u know some anime make 51 episodes, and the anime gets boring in the end, it's like an over-streched story....but in FMA, damn it's my 2nd favorite cause Ayashi no Ceres is my 1st.....
and again aregato des ne.....Alphonse-kun...oh one more thing i need to tell u....
thanks to your avatar and username, i was wondering....hmmmm....who was that person.....heh.....and there u are.....i went and checked out your userpage.....hehehe...i was curious to see who was that person....^__^
and again...aregato des Alphonse-kun...^__^
I haven't been able to work on many drawings, and my scanner's software needs to be "registered" online, or something
.
Mostly, though, it's the time constraints.
I see. I'm past case studies and school projects since high school. Remember to strive hard to get that "A"! Me? I've been working! Yep, my life ain't all that jazzy either. That will come when feel much more at peace.... About my occupation, well I did take weapon based martial arts. I dislike sharp objects yet I'm fond of swords. Weird huh? I'm not being trained anymore. Martial arts to me is something I use to keep my mind off things that cloud it. Like I said, finding peace. Well, see ya later.
well, your drawings were really great.......and everytime i see a lovely avatar or an interesting username in my way, i like checking out the person's page, and i like the name Alphonse from FMA....it's nice.....well and and also i love FMA a lot....it's a really great 10/10 anime.......really successful.....well thanx for replying....^__^
Hey, just dropping by and whatnot. How ya been? Well, see ya later.
hiii, hehhehee, just dropped by cause i liked your avatar...anyways nice visiting your page...and nice drawings u got there....^__^
Oi Alfonse-kun!
It's about time that I got my messages in on time. I'll try to keep it up but there's no telling how long that will last.
I guess that we will be trilinguals soon. Cool.
Yep, volleyball is coming to an end. I'll miss it but I really could use a break and focus more on my school work.
I don't think I'll do anything with basketball this year. My friends want me to play, but it's too much of a hassle.
So you're continuing with your Mercenaries manga. That's great. I can't wait to see how it turn out. So do you have a name for your next character.
I wish you the best of luck on your contest.
Sorry I haven't checked on your videos yet. But I will, then I'll tell you what I think.
Thanks for the link, I'll be sure to check it out.
I think I have a messenger. I'm not really sure because I don't use it. I'll let you know about that one tool
Well that's about it from me.
Ja ne Yamichi ^_^
Much thanks for the comment on my L vector!
Monkey feet?! No way! He is so cool
Helllloooooo! Alfonse-kun. So happy to get a comment from you. Sorry for having not in contact with you for a long time. You know that time has come. It's almost the end of the year 2006. So...load of revision and exam paper.
Yeah... I notice about the grass too. But if you're in my country, those color do fit well.
Anyway, thanks for the lovely comment. I'm sure you're busy with your papers too. Good luck all the way. Oh, and here's a gift for you. Ganbatte!
Hey Al. I take it you've seen the FMA movie. I kinda like Alphons Hidrich since I'm 1/4 German. Maby thats why I like anime. See you latter.
Oi Alfonse-kun!
Gomen gomen. I'll admit that I've gotten quite behind on my messages. I had a major project to complete in science so that was a major set back.
But it's finished..and now I have a project in Spanish. Great.
Well I'll get started on that later.
So how have you been?
Hey, I didn't know that your birthday was in November. I also didn't know new stuff came out in November. I'll have to keep that in mind.
So you took Spanish too? Did you think it was hard? I guess it's okay. I have to take Spanish for two years too, but I don't mind it.
Well that's about it from me.
Ja ne Yamichi ^_^
P.S Fear not! I'll still keep trying to get my messages in on time ^_^
P.S.S I think that the new animes are great. I had no idea that the same person was the voice for Vash and Ichigo! Now that I think about it they do sound a lot alike.
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Oi Alfonse-kun!
I'm doing great! Wow I actually understood what you said. Hmm maybe this spanish thing isn't that hard
Thanks for being so understanding. But I shouldn't be so busy for much longer. Vollyball season will end in about two weeks.
Yea, I'm taking Biology this year. Actually that was what my project was on.
Yay! Thanks for the help Yamichi. I shouldn't need too much help though.
Funny, I have a 98 in spanish right now.
Wow, it's seems like you have been busy too. That's a lot of projects in such little time.
Ya know now that I think about it lots of new things do come out in November since it's so close to Christmas. Guess I never really thought about it
That's great that you're doing another doujin! It's been awhile since you've uploaded one.
So, I bet you can guess my next question. What's it going to be?
Ja ne Yamichi ^_^
Hey Al! Look what I made, It's Ed from the movie(as close as I could make it)
Alfonse! So sorry for the uber-late response!
Remeber when you asked me what "tags" were? Well, I guess when you achieve a certain level of participation or something, you get tags. If you look on my userpage, it says, "renowned artist,critic". And I only noticed this today, so it wasn't there yesterday (and yesterday I was level 69 and today I'm 70, soo...)
But when I looked at other people's pages, like Chichiri1907, it says nothing, and she has a higher artistic level than me... So maybe it's our participation level? I'm trying to see what it says for others, but that's proving rather difficult... let's check out Sheqel's page...
Ok, see for him it says, "renowned artist,renowned scanner,forumgoer" but I don't see anything for some other mods, so I dunno what's going on with that... Kuroimisa has "renowned artist, forumgoer"
And can you see the number of credits you have, or is there something up with my account?
See you soon!
Wats up? Thanks for visiting me on my gb. I've recently came back after 4 months or so. Yeah, life is demanding sometimes. Well, take care Alfonse. I see you got a new avy. Fullmetal is indeed a interesting anime.